Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Punishment is not for revenge but to lessen the crime and reform the criminal. After completion of prison statement, criminals actively involve in criminal activities. What is the root cause and methods to get rid out of this problem? I feel emotional stress and unemployment force offenders to commit crime and educational programmes in prison is an optimal solution for this problem as I shall explain in this essay.
The primary reason for committing crimes after punishment is emotional state. The emotional state has a tremendous impact on individual thought processes, and as a result, can be linked to criminal activities. There are ample of national and international organizations offering studies and statistics about global and local crimes committed by offenders who spend 10-15 years in prison United Nations Office on Crime, for example. Because of negative emotional state of an individual, not able to find a solution for a problem. As a result, feel aggressive and commit crime. When an individual has positive emotional state, able to tackle the obstacle with a plethora of solutions. Secondary reason for increasing crime rates is unemployment. Although criminals are suspended in jail in order to lessen the crime and for the safety of the nation, but it effects their efficiency of work and skills. Therefore, prefer to participate in criminal gangs after serving first punishment.
All criminals should access education in prison so that acquire knowledge to handle emotional state in an optimistic way by handling their anger. A positive psychology concept of Broaden Build posits that cognitive functioning expand when individual is in positive emotional state and vice versa. if education program based on teaching trade skills in prison, criminals acquire knowledge about how to earn their livelihood and able to achieve stable jobs after completion of imprisonment period. Therefore, criminal rates decline.
In conclusion, Because of unstable emotional state of mind and socioeconomic status criminals opt crime for their livelihood. If they access knowledge in prison about various trades and acquire skills through education, able to divert their minds in positive side and help us to lessen the crime. Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an optimistic way" with adverb for "optimistic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Suggestion: If
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38842975207 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87055778494 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537190082645 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5696373848 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.15 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 3.9879759519 426% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192601226746 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657786402224 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612883326717 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123817409293 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997949638002 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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