You relocated to an overseas country recently and shipped your furniture and other possessions through a shipping company. When you received them, you found some of them got damaged. Write a letter to the delivery manager of the shipping company:
• when and where the shipment was
• describe the damages
• what you want the shipment company to do.
Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you well. I have recently received a shipment from Pakistan, which includes my furniture and other material. These items were sent by my family via your shipping company, as they had an enormous trust in your company and the way your company manages transportation of valuable items. However, this time few problems have occurred, regarding the condition of furniture.
Let me explain you further. It seems like, this time it wasn't managed properly and that has caused severe damage to my furniture from numerous places, various crack have occurred on it. Moreover, other valuable items have also been found to be partially damaged.
Therefore, it is requested to conduct an inquiry in this regard and identify people who are responsible for this damage caused and would like to request you to get me reimbursement for the damaged caused. Moreover, I would like to request you get items of customers insured in future, so that these sort of issues could be avoided.
Regards
Your's Sincerely,
Ahmed Ali Arbani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I hope this letter finds you well. I hav...
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Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., regarding the condition of furniture. Let me explain you further. It seems lik...
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Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...ou further. It seems like, this time it wasnt managed properly and that has caused se...
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lso been found to be partially damaged. Therefore, it is requested to conduct an...
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Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...uest you get items of customers insured in future, so that these sort of issues could be ...
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Line 7, column 294, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this sort' or 'these nulls'?
Suggestion: this sort; these nulls
...of customers insured in future, so that these sort of issues could be avoided. Regard...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...these sort of issues could be avoided. Regards Yours Sincerely, Ahmed ...
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Line 9, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of issues could be avoided. Regards Yours Sincerely, Ahmed Ali Arbani
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ided. Regards Yours Sincerely, Ahmed Ali Arbani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13218390805 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57412888497 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683908045977 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0289211033 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194931400904 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071758908329 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044231754119 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127258374622 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583794664951 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.