You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
• describe the situation
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you well. It is to inform you that, my exams are scheduled to start from mid January, which is 15 days from today. However, it will be very difficult for me to focus on my studies. As there is so much nuisance being caused by my room mate.
Let me explain you in detail. My room partner is always late and has been seen partying with his friends, on various occasions. Moreover, on numerous occasions I have tried to inform him, but it hasn't been useful. Initially, I had tried to ignore this matter, but quiet recently, I have witnessed my room mate having drugs with his friends.
Therefore, it is requested to look into this matter and conduct an official inquiry to resolve this matter. Moreover, I have gathered sufficient evidence to support my point and if possible, I should be allotted a separate room or change my room mate.
Yours Sincerely
Brian Adams
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I hope this letter finds you well. It is...
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Line 2, column 207, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ifficult for me to focus on my studies. As there is so much nuisance being caused ...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...ions I have tried to inform him, but it hasnt been useful. Initially, I had tried to ...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oom mate having drugs with his friends. Therefore, it is requested to look into ...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r change my room mate. Yours Sincerely Brian Adams
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59259259259 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4271429109 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685185185185 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6353485084 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6363636364 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186397022995 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725421721239 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672662747687 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124770292534 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622867448988 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.