You rent an apartment. You want to tell your landlord that you are happy with the apartment in general, but there are some small repairs that need to be carried out. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
• say what you like about the apartment
• describe the repairs that need to be made
• explain how the repairs will improve your quality of life
You rent an apartment. You want to tell your landlord that you are happy with the apartment in general, but there are some small repairs that need to be carried out. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
• say what you like about the apartment
• describe the repairs that need to be made
• explain how the repairs will improve your quality of life
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am glad to inform you, that I am content with your house no-13 Everest apartment, where I have recently located to. However, there are some repair work that is required to be done on topmost.
With regards to the apartment, it’s beautiful as it has conservatory, the favorite part of the house. Also, the backyard is well equipped with vegetables and fruits. Moreover, the garden has ample space to decorate with different flowers. Besides, the balcony gives the cozy look as I can have my coffee and read book in peaceful environment.
Let me brief you about the reconstruction required in the living area. The wall meant for placing television has some cracks that can lead to water seepage. Moreover, the knob of the kitchen door is not in place and can break anytime. On top of it, the fire alarm is not working efficiently and has to be addresses at earliest.
All the improvement that’s necessary will make the house look clean and clear. Once the knob gets in place we will avoid using hands directly on door that in turn will keep the door dry and tidy and when I will cook it will not cause chaos when the replacement of fire alarm done.
I really look forward to your cooperation in this.
Yours sincerely
Urvashi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...etter to your landlord. In your letter • say what you like about the apartment ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, well, as to, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 937.175257732 145% => OK
No of words: 290.0 206.0 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67586206897 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40126056867 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579310344828 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 290.88556701 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.335879211 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7647058824 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 4.34317383033 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470030665765 0.216113520407 217% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137226890935 0.0766984524023 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.199137937057 0.0603063233224 330% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215134144275 0.12726935374 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.262835298729 0.0580467560999 453% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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