Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to formally complaint about the car I hired from you ten days back. But since one week its A.C is not working and even after calling at your customer care, the problem has not been resolved.
I am a Marketing Manager of a prestigious company based in Mumbai and visited Delhi for the promotion of a new product launched by it. Now, as per the demand of my job, I have to travel to several parts of Delhi and as you know that in this May month, it is scorching hot here which has made my life miserable.
Moreover, I have to look presentable for the meetings to give a good impression but by the time I reach there, my clothes get wet in sweat and starts stinking and thus spoil my persona in front of the clients. Also, it ruins my mood, indeed, affecting my work adversely.
I want you to replace this car immediately and provide me a car with functional A.C so that I can focus on my work. In case you do not follow this matter then I will have to seek for legal advice.
Yours sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...m you ten days back. But since one week its A.C is not working and even after calli...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: C
...ten days back. But since one week its A.C is not working and even after calling a...
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Line 9, column 83, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: C
... and provide me a car with functional A.C so that I can focus on my work. In case...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, thus, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28140703518 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36266423093 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663316582915 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5684631748 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157902086771 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651043865636 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599951162245 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985865480549 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766758642218 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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