You rented a car recently, but were not satisfied with it.Write a letter of complaint to the rental agency. In your letter Introduce yourself Explain what went wrong with the car you rented Ask for some form of compensation

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You rented a car recently, but were not satisfied with it.
Write a letter of complaint to the rental agency. In your letter
 Introduce yourself
 Explain what went wrong with the car you rented
 Ask for some form of compensation

Dear sir or madam,
I am writing to complain about the bad service I have recieved from your agency.

My name is Rahi Honarvar and I rented a BMW car from your agancy on 21th of July for 3 days while I was spending my holiday
in Melbourne. As it is clear in my contract, I asked for a special model which was a release of 2017.

Unfortunately, I faced various problems with regard to this car renting. Firstly, when I went to the Melbourn's branch of
your agency they told me that there was not such an order in their list; consequently, I had to stay there for more than 2 hours
till they could find me a car. Secondly, The car was not in a good condition and in the second day of my stay the car broke
down and I had to leave in infront of my hotel. Finally, the terms and conditions of my convection were hazzy and you did not
mentioned some of the issues vividly.

I think that I am entitled to ask for compensation because you ruined my 3-days holiday. I want to ask you to give me back the
rental pay and all the transportation fees that I spent during these days.

I am looking forward to your swift response.

Yours sincerely,
Rahi Honarvar

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... the second day of my stay the car broke down and I had to leave in infront of my...
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...my convection were hazzy and you did not mentioned some of the issues vividly. ...
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...your swift response. Yours sincerely, Rahi Honarvar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, i think, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30630630631 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51427222234 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612612612613 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.235299869 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9090909091 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 4.34317383033 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.29896907216 256% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228371181147 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798659379461 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322684203445 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745820969184 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432782068597 0.0580467560999 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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