You said you would attend a friend's dinner party but you did not go.
Write a letter to your friend.
In the letter:
- Apologize for not attending
- Explain why you did not attend
- Say what you will do to make up for it
Hello Rich,
I hope you’re doing excellent and thank you for inviting me for inviting me the dinner party. I was quite excited when I received your invitation and made my mind to attend the party. But, my bad luck! I couldn’t make it happen. I’m really sorry for not attending the party.
Actually, as you know I’ve recently joined a multinational company and I’m bombarded with lot of responsibilities. I came to know that I’ve one of the deadline on the same day of your birthday date, even I spent around 15 hours in the office to in order to achieve the target. Due to that deadline, I wasn’t in the position to join the event.
Apart from this, I’ve a good news that I’m available on the upcoming weekend and I would love to spend time with you. What about the Tom Cruise movie which is recently hit into the theaters? And after that what about going to your favorite restaurant for the candlelight dinner? Sounds excited! Isn’t it?
So, please confirm if you are available to give it try to this plan.
Your best friend!
Deepak
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
...oin the event. Apart from this, I’ve a good news that I’m available on the upcoming week...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 52, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'tries'?
Suggestion: tries
...confirm if you are available to give it try to this plan. Your best friend! Dee...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, really, so, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68783068783 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49949464392 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656084656085 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7298334621 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1538461538 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5384615385 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308904128836 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874665267283 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722029315012 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150386725753 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733379094788 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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