you saw an adevert in a newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charitable event.
write a letter of application to the organisers. in your letter :
explain why you are interested in helping
give details suitable past experience.
suggest ways you might help with the event.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter in regard to your advertisement in yesterdays newspaper, in which you have asked for volunteers for a health checkup camp by your charitable NGO.
For your information, I am a medical graduate with MD physician degree and have an experience of more that 10 years in treating patients. I really like to work for charity and I had joined an NGO 5 years ago and with this I had learned to deal with large number of patients efficiently. I am always eager to do something for the underprivileged and social welfare. This gives me a lot of satisfaction that I am also doing something for the well being of our society.
As I am working with an organisation for the past 5 years and with this experience I can help you to make this social event even more successful and can be supportive in tackling the problems we generally face during these events. Moreover I can also advertise this event in my social circle because I have a quite good number of contacts with people in our society.
In the last I request you to take my offer thoughtfully. You can contact me on my mobile number 9872961234 and I hope to hear a positive response from your side. You can call me anytime as I am on leave these days.
I wish you good luck for your event.
Yours sincerely,
Dr baljit singh.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-08-31 | baljit1174 | 78 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for the well being of our society. As I am working with an organisation for...
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Line 11, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t 5 years and with this experience I can help you to make this social event even ...
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Line 11, column 257, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... we generally face during these events. Moreover I can also advertise this event in my s...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, really, so, well, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59751037344 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77274066039 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551867219917 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2147691787 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213141562947 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895005134192 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724021761902 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157066019287 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745335860095 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.