You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event.
Write a letter of application to the organisers. In your letter:
•Eplain why you are interested in helping
•give details suitable past experience
•suggest ways you might help with the event
Dear sir,
I saw an advertisement that your hospital requires unpaid workers. Being a medical student it will be a great opportunity to work there. I am glad it will be a pleasure to serve the patient in there bad situation.
It is near by my home so that there will be no difficulty to travel during my free time.
Currently, I am the only one to complete a open heart surgery in my college so working in the operation theater would be great for me. Nevertheless, I am also good at first aid treatment even though I'm still pursuing my medical studies.
My identification proof will be submitted while joining. Advert states that the starting date will be from 1st of may but my availability will be only from the second week of may. However, if you agree with my joining date I'm generous to serve your hospital during my free time without wages.
Regards
Revanth
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 7, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...tient in there bad situation. It is near by my home so that there will be no diffic...
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Line 6, column 42, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...urrently, I am the only one to complete a open heart surgery in my college so wor...
^
Line 6, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be great for me. Nevertheless, I am also good at first aid treatment even though ...
^^
Line 6, column 201, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...good at first aid treatment even though Im still pursuing my medical studies. ...
^^
Line 8, column 32, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ies. My identification proof will be submitted while joining. Advert states ...
^^
Line 8, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly from the second week of may. However, if you agree with my joining date Im gen...
^^
Line 8, column 227, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ver, if you agree with my joining date Im generous to serve your hospital during ...
^^
Line 10, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... my free time without wages. Regards Revanth
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 722.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59872611465 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.681763156 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656050955414 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6007668621 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2222222222 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 4.34317383033 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0447410990768 0.216113520407 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0191854796034 0.0766984524023 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306537640171 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0259138818821 0.12726935374 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202533727627 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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