Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational, otherwise, they are a complete waste of time.
Do you agree or disagree?
These days children spend most of their time at school and attend various additional courses to develop their skills. However, they are given list time to play and participate in extra curricular activities, do these things really gives them benefits? Playing games is very important in order to grow well.
Of course, education is important to have a successful career, but playing games is most important thing in kids life. Continuous studying may result in mental disorder, through which many kids has been affected. So many schools introduced a daily hour for physical education such as games, yoga and much more.
Students love sports, they love to spend their time with friends which gives them joyfulness. Many educational institutions train students for a specific sport, if the student do well his career continues in sports, where education plays a minor role. For example Sachin Tendulkar one of the best batsman in the world quite his studies at the age of 14 and started his career in cricket now he is one of the icon of cricket.
The role of students in sports has become a greater part, many parents today appreciate their children to develop their skills in sports and many educational institutions add more sports in which individual student can select their own interest and take part. Spending correct time in games and extra curricular activities makes the students to concentrate more in their studies, probably it is one of the best thing to make them healthy( physically and mentally). Therefore, children's free time should be for their extra curricular activities excluding studies, through which they come to know themselves.
To conclude with, education in children's life plays a major role for their future development. Nevertheless, spending their free time on games and activities which they like makes their career more stronger. In my opinion spending their leisure time for education may affect children's mentally, instead of that making them take part in sports will be a better option.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 194, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...ties which they like makes their career more stronger. In my opinion spending their leisure t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, well, for example, of course, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15151515152 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61236728082 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539393939394 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.431164259 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110437320059 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461223983822 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046341825109 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692966472167 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437345085331 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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