You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter:
• Explain why you're interested in the tour.
• Ask for information about dates and prices.
• Express your concerns about your fitness level.
You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Vishal Panda and I am writing this letter in regards to the one-week walking tour in the Himalayas which is conducted by your company during the months of June to September. I have always been fascinated with the mountains and I found an opportunity to make my dream come true. After reading the brochure, I was mighty impressed with this tour because of one sentence which caught my eye “3 out of 5 tallest peak of the world can be seen during this tour!” , hence I wanted to be a part of this adventure.
Can you please provide me with following details regarding the hike? I would like to know probable start date during the month of September (Preferably in first half of the month), along with the pricing details for an individual. Also, kindly mention the payment method available and other important details which are required to confirm the booking.
Do I require a medical certificate? Or is there any standard fitness level in order to be eligible for this trip? In that case I would like to apprise you that I am not in the best of fitness level. I can do moderate walking, jogging etc so it would be very helpful if you can suggest me with some daily routines in order to make myself fit for the trek by September.
Thanking you in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Vishal Panda
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...shal Panda and I am writing this letter in regards to the one-week walking tour in the Himala...
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Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...orld can be seen during this tour!' , hence I wanted to be a part of this adv...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61924686192 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50166611148 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615062761506 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9172374405 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199439433732 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748583145335 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660643171135 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135877040628 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598725973454 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.