Dear Sir or Madam,
Hope this email finds you well.
I am writing to you related to a one-week walking tour in the mountains, I saw the brochure and I am really interested in it. But I do have some concerns about the tour. So I wrote this.
To begin with, I would like to know the dates and prices of the event, because I have some classes that need to be taken during the summer holiday, I am afraid that the dates will not be available during that period.
Secondly, I used to do exercises when I was a middle school, but after going to university, I got less time on the exercises. and I am afraid that whether I can keep up with that or not.
Lastly, I am really interested in the project, and really thank you for giving us the opportunity to us all to have a chance to do the exercise and meet more people.
It would be great if I can get the answers above.
Thank you,
Galina
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 127, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...sity, I got less time on the exercises. and I am afraid that whether I can keep up ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, really, second, secondly, so, well, i am afraid, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19540229885 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3066534243 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591954022989 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7808748764 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214498820945 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877998526944 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954733651267 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095635824211 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086275338772 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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