You share your room with another student in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has parties and friends visiting.
Write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the room mate.
Dear Madam
I am one of the students who residing in a hostel in room no 101. I am penning down this epistle to express my dissatisfaction about the behaviour of my room mate which causes lots of irritation to me.
My roommate is from arts department who always create trouble with her activities, due to which I am not unable to concentrate on my studies. Her friends use to visit our room during midnight and do late night parties, while playing loud music. Moreover, the most annoying thing is that she takes my belongings without taking my permission. She is also use very rude and abusive language with me which is unbearable.
I already mentioned you that I am very studious person and choose medical stream to build my future better. So, you can easily understand that it would be really difficult for me to study in such a bad environment. I would like to request you to change my room for next term or provide me single room for living. If you cannot do so now kind Counsel her to change her behaviour and show some generosity towards other.
I hope you understand my condition and I would like to request you to take an action on an immediate basis.
Thanking you
Yours faithfully. 25th Feburary 2018
Devin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... concentrate on my studies. Her friends use to visit our room during midnight and d...
^^^
Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'used'.
Suggestion: used
...thout taking my permission. She is also use very rude and abusive language with me ...
^^^
Line 13, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s. Thanking you Yours faithfully. 25th Feburary 2018 Devin
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63636363636 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62936374795 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640909090909 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3375320074 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4615384615 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223048245383 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790928782467 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04791448626 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107605366166 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281470900873 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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