You went to a restaurant with your friends write a letter to the restaurant owner thanking him for the food and services offered by them
Dear Sir
I am one of the customers who use to visit your restaurant on a frequent basis. This time the purpose of mine to pen down this epistle is to pay my regards to you for providing delicious meals and facilities on my special day.
Last week, I visited your restaurant to celebrate my birthday with my friends and after the celebration they all complimented me about the standard and quality of services and food items which were provided by your staff members.We had ordered lots of things including starter, main course and dessert and every food items has its own taste and we are overwhelmed by its presentation and ingredients used in it to prepare all the dishes.Moreover, the Aroma of food items have increased our appetite, due to which we have ordered a long list of eatables.
Apart from this, the ambience of your hotel was very pleasing and provides tranquility.the staff members were very Cooperative and well behaved with other customers. In addition, the thing which has no words of Praise was that you value the time of your customer which is more appreciated and provided from prompt services towards the orders which were being made by us.However, I would like to suggest you one thing which may be beneficial for you and increase the goodwill of your hotel. Like, one of my friend was vegetarian and very less items were available in your menu card for him, so if u add on some more items for them it definitely will give a complete package to customers at one place
Again I would like to say you thank you for ur marvellous services
Yours sincerely
Radison
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ar Sir I am one of the customers who use to visit your restaurant on a frequent ...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...ich were provided by your staff members.We had ordered lots of things including st...
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Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...ts used in it to prepare all the dishes.Moreover, the Aroma of food items have increased...
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Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...t from this, the ambience of your hotel was very pleasing and provides tranquility.the staff memb...
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Line 7, column 371, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
... the orders which were being made by us.However, I would like to suggest you one thing ...
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Line 7, column 538, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun items is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ne of my friend was vegetarian and very less items were available in your menu card ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, well, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 937.175257732 141% => OK
No of words: 280.0 206.0 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73571428571 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67413919013 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592857142857 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 290.88556701 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 16.3608247423 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.067084955 44.8134815571 344% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 221.0 76.5299724578 289% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.6666666667 16.8248392259 277% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 4.34317383033 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251049345005 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113608831719 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576422008561 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152068393181 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309745729696 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 8.37731958763 289% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 33.25 70.7449484536 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 7.45979381443 269% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.1 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 8.54432989691 239% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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