You went to a restaurant with your friends write a letter to the restaurant owner thanking him for the food and services offered by them

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Helen Keller, resident of Pasco county, Orion. I am writing this letter to thank you for the service that you have provided last week for my friend's birthday party.

On October, 1st 2019, about 30 of us had dinner at the restaurant and it was amazing. Probably the place had been over crowded comparing your normal days, despite we have received a best services. All the food items were fresh and delicious and had many options even for vegetarians too. Furthermore our waiter Jason did a great job on receiving us, making arrangements, and choosing our favorite dishes, an energetic and enthusiastic person. Children enjoyed not only the food but also the desserts.

I would definitely recommend the restaurant for my other friends also.
I would like to suggest one more improvement. The car parking slots are sufficient for normal days but if you expand for bigger parties would be a great help. We had been searching for more than 20 minutes and parked few hundred meters away from the restaurant because of the tightly packed shops in that area.

Thank you for your wonderful facilities and ambiance and we will meet you soon in the near future.

Yours faithfully,
Helen

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d comparing your normal days, despite we have received a best services. All the f...
^^
Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... normal days, despite we have received a best services. All the food items were ...
^
Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...many options even for vegetarians too. Furthermore our waiter Jason did a great job on rec...
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Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...end the restaurant for my other friends also. I would like to suggest one more imp...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89855072464 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52937190502 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.700483091787 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8956629 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281657993186 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861713444062 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819529275271 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157299824645 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528836352497 0.0580467560999 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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