You should spend 20 minutes for this task
You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter
• Explain your situation
• Describe your problems
• Tell him/her when you think you can start
You should write atleast 150 words
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to notify you that I will not be able to start with my services in your company from nest week due to some reasons. Let me explain the same in further detail.
I was issued with the offer letter form IDFC Mutual fund for the position as assistant manager and was supposed to start with my services from 20th September next week but due to sudden health issues suffered by my aunt, I will not be able to begin with my job for the date mentioned.
My aunt had an asthma attack yesterday and was admitted in hospital. The doctors have advised her medication and complete bed rest, moreover she has stay away inside her house away from smoke and pollution as this will make her breathing more difficult. Since she has no one to look after her I have to care of her health for a week to ensure that she is improving.
I apologise that my delay in joining the company will cause inconvenience for you. I hope you will understand my situation and will postpone my day of joining to 29th September.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon,
Your sincerely,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hearing from you soon, Your sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on, Your sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, to begin with, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52216748768 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3706714221 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605911330049 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.5092586513 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26256329806 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110253212077 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964651661999 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147429328673 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919403350734 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.