You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee.
Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The given image illustrate the process of the life period of the honey bee.
From the overall perspective, it is evident that there six stages in the life cycle and require more than 34 hours to help the bee become mature, beginning with the event that the female lay 1 or 2 eggs every three days and ending with the young adult take 4 days to complete their developing phases.
The process commences with the eggs are bornt by the female bees every three days. Following this, there is the hatching egg time which takes more than ̣ days. Subsequently, at the days 5 after hatching, the bee' egg gradually open at the top of the egg and the initial structure of bee exist. However, nearly half of this body still attach with the egg which totally separate from the egg after that 2 days. At the day 9th, nymph moults of the bees make a threefold jump at their size.
At the fifth stage of the process, bee develop to become the young adult phase and have many different patterns on their body. As we can see that a part of body below their head has some cross pattern and the size of body gain substantial change. After all, there is nearly similar when compare at the adults bee and the bees reach mature after that 4 days. Finally, the period of maturing life of the bee continually happen and begin with the new generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...o become the young adult phase and have many different patterns on their body. As we can see t...
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Line 7, column 303, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
...e is nearly similar when compare at the adults bee and the bees reach mature after tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, so, still, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43089430894 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16220425471 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556910569106 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4833150956 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0909090909 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0856428020579 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399074620982 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0219215734611 0.0603063233224 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651465717671 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237734390802 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.