You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
give details of what went wrong
explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time
say what action you would like the manager to take
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ...,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this email to let you know about my experience at your hotel last week. I stayed in room 202B for three days, from August 5th to August 8th. At first, everything was good until I figured out that the cooling system in my room did not work properly.
Let me explain more details about my situation. I always booked a room at your hotel whenever I have a business trip to Ottawa. Unfortunately, this time, the system was broken, the temperature of the room was so high during the summer that I had to open all of the windows. I also filed a complaint to the receptionist; however, there was no immediate action to resolve the problem for me. It was one of the most terrible trips I have ever experienced in my life.
I was so disappointed with the service at your hotel. Therefore, I would like you to take this issue into account and solve it reasonably. I will consider staying at your hotel the next time if you make sure there will no longer be the same issue like that as well as offer me some discounts if possible.
Look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Mira
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...gh during the summer that I had to open all of the windows. I also filed a complaint to th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37799043062 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49738766011 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626794258373 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9372288538 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3846153846 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267832612599 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853052909855 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501286709144 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154549652388 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507806131569 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.