You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly explain how this is affecting you and your neighbors suggest what should be done about the problem
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
Exactly two weeks, the device used for collecting garbage has been functionally inefficient whereby causing several difficulties around the neighborhood which as become an object of ridicule.
However, the system put to place has been maladministering it's responsibilities. over the weeks, there has been an inconsistency in the collecting of the waste. every dirt should be collected three times a week so as to establish sanity but otherwise it has been a disaster. it comes once a week and other times it doesn't.
Furthermore, this has caused unhealthy dissatisfaction between I and the neighbors, our environment stinks and also disfigures the structural design of the house. Most importantly, the unproductive waste collection scheme has made the environment giving way to rodents and inhabitable for our children causing them to be susceptible to germs and viruses which is very unethical.
However, I suggest that experts should be invited to diagnose the problem by debugging the coordination.
I look forward to seeing the system restored.
Yours faithfully
James Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Over
... maladministering its responsibilities. over the weeks, there has been an inconsiste...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Every
...istency in the collecting of the waste. every dirt should be collected three times a ...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... should be collected three times a week so as to establish sanity but otherwise it has b...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...y but otherwise it has been a disaster. it comes once a week and other times it do...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...it comes once a week and other times it doesnt. Furthermore, this has caused unheal...
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Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: BETWEEN_PRP[2]
Message: Incorrect form of the pronoun 'I'. Use: 'between me'.
Suggestion: between me
...is has caused unhealthy dissatisfaction between I and the neighbors, our environment stin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55555555556 4.54256449028 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30226622346 2.54303337028 130% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678362573099 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0172632967 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157079972832 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528054353449 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338903328841 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636899756081 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275939499492 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 8.71597938144 168% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.