You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You should write at least 150 words.
You are visiting your close friend’s city next week.
Write a letter asking your friend to be at the airport to receive you. Express your desire to see the famous historical places in the city.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Tom,
Finally, I have booked my tickets and arriving London on 23rd June 2018 around noon and I am writing this letter to refresh your memory that you promised me to receive at airport once I land in London.
I am going to be in London for a week and plan to see all historical places because my son is very fervent in history and I do not want to miss this opportunity for him. I searched the travel guide which talks about several historical places but I believe that not all are worth seeing. Therefore, I want you to extend your advice about the museums, forts and any relevant places. In addition, my family which includes my wife, daughter and son are interested to see the real play at London fort which I heard very exciting and insightful about past events occurred. It would be a help if you collect the information about timings and schedule.
Do not be exasperate, I have kept enough time to spend with you and other friends. I kept all my evenings except Thursday free and we shall visit our university pub, hostels and city center clubs in night. I am very excited about the meet and anticipate joyful trip of London.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
With Love,
GoG
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd anticipate joyful trip of London. I am looking forward to hearing from you....
^
Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...forward to hearing from you. With Love, GoG
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48636363636 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3715732129 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627272727273 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.983326187 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7272727273 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23373775255 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847689007162 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658969276241 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144017455565 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039547578013 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.