Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my interest regarding the vacant post in your workshop, as well as inquiring about the job.
I have recently finished a comprehensive course on car repair with high grades. Furthermore, I have 2 months of experience as an assistant mechanic in a workshop here in Surrey, provable by a reference letter at your request. However, a few questions have arisen in my mind that I would greatly appreciate it if are answered.
First and foremost, in the advert, no information has been stated about the annual wage or whether the job is permanent or seasonal. Moreover, it will be appreciated if you could elaborate on the possible benefits such as medical coverage and vacations that may come with the position.
Last but not least, I was wondering if you accept people with physical disabilities because my left ear was partially damaged during the tour I did in Iraq a few years ago. It is not a severe damage and I do not need any hearing aid. Nonetheless, it should be stated in the contract due to insurance requirements.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
John Doe
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, nonetheless, regarding, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86432160804 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89324199143 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698492462312 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9554034948 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 4.34317383033 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231007348148 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690740842519 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516624924916 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111040357738 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442780786657 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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