Some people use the Internet to search for solutions to their medical problems. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your own opinion and examples from your experience.
Diagnosis and treatment of ailments have an ample importance these days. Some people thus opt for surfing online websites in order to find a proper treatment for their disorders. I believe this is a positive development due to the fact that it is cost-saving and convenient compared to conventional methods.
One reason which illustrates self-diagnosis using the internet is a positive trend can be identified as its inexpensiveness. By taking conventional methods, people have to visit a doctor and then pay a colossal amount of money to be treated. However, using free online information allow this sum to be saved. Statistics published by the California Medical Board, for instance, reveal that, on average, 92 percent of residents spend 2 thousand dollars annually on medical bills. This evidence highlights the financial benefit of using online sources of self-treating for the patient.
Another line of thought on searching online for finding a solution to diseases suggests its convenience. To visit medical clinics, the masses have to travel long distances; thereafter, wait for hours in waiting rooms to be examined by a physician, which is intolerable when they are affected by the ailment. If the search their symptoms online, however, all these inconveniences will be eliminated, allowing them to find a proper solution with a click of a button. A survey by the U.S government, for example, has shown that 85 percent of Americans are reluctant toward visiting clinics when they suffer minor health problems owing to the fact that they have to drive tens of miles to get to a clinic and spend a minimum of 4 hours in waiting to be examined. Instead, they prefer using reliable online health websites.
To recapitulate, this essay has demonstrated the trend of using online sources for treating diseases are both more economical and more convenient; therefore, I believe it is a positive development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
... a click of a button. A survey by the U.S government, for example, has shown that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21359223301 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04261167133 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57928802589 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3449597085 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.071428571 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177057792456 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614314198593 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368875548324 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106781710865 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023876044298 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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