You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Henry,
I am writing to request you for granting unpaid leaves for a few days, as I would not be able to join the office due to some specific arrangements made for a celebration in my town.
Let's me elucidate the whole scenario, I and my siblings are far away from my parental house and this Monday we decided to gather and celebrate our parent's 25th anniversary in my hometown. All the arrangements are already made and guests are invited to make the day special. Also, it's our pleasure to celebrate such a wonderful occasion together after a long time and to express our gratitude and love for the sacrifices they did for us. I need four days leaves i.e. from 20th Dec to 24th Dec to make assure for well preparation for the event.
Currently, I am working on the Japanese project and I have 2 meetings scheduled on the required days. Although I coordinated with Neha to attend the client as she had an amazing experience with the same client at earlier meetings, at the same time, I would be available on phone and check out my emails for smooth running of work in my absence. Apart from this, no other assignments are due.
I would be grateful if you could consider my request.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely
Ani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... invited to make the day special. Also, its our pleasure to celebrate such a wonder...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56637168142 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56582615502 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641592920354 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4462174189 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8181818182 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147181942277 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603272319334 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367964507959 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869060011203 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215707148102 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.