You stayed at your friend s house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia You left a file with important documents in the room you stayed in Write a letter to your friend describing the file and ask him her to return it to you by post

Dear Mia,

I am writing this letter to find my important documents that I left in your guest room.

First of all, I would like to appreciate that you let me stay at your home last week. Without your support, I believe that I had to pay for a hotel more than two hundred dollars per night since it is one of the longest holiday seasons this year. Actually, I surely left my documents from work in your home. The size of the papers is A4 and they are in an ivory envelop with my signature at the bottom. This was on the main table if I still remember correctly.

I will pay all cost that will take for shipping so it would be great if you could send the documents to my home in the US by this weekend. Thank you and one big news, I am visiting Australia next March.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,
Kate

Votes
Average: 8.7 (2 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, look, so, still, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 680.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1717791411 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14186883181 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662576687117 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9176001251 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248777717655 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901972321222 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687704076479 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155446192241 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00495744080972 0.0580467560999 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 70.7449484536 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.61 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.17 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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