Dear, Mia.
I hope you are having good time in Sydney and thank you for letting me stay at your home.
I actually am writing this letter to say sorry that I accidentaly broke one of the blue bowls you placed on the top of the shelf next to the oven. I was trying to put the bowl back and dropped it on the floor. I am so disappointed by myself and sorry for what I have done for your favourite bowl. I want to replace the bowl to the same one or if you have any other bowls that you are planning to buy, could you send me a photo of it so that I can get it before you come back. At last, I am sorry and enjoy the rest of your holiday Mia.
Best regards, Kate
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 12, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...ing me stay at your home. I actually am writing this letter to say sorry that I...
^^
Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the top of the shelf next to the oven. I was trying to put the bowl back and dro...
^
Line 4, column 211, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... bowl back and dropped it on the floor. I am so disappointed by myself and sorry ...
^
Line 4, column 298, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...at I have done for your favourite bowl. I want to replace the bowl to the same on...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 533.0 937.175257732 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 139.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.8345323741 4.54256449028 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.90806232263 2.54303337028 75% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 127.690721649 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 170.1 290.88556701 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2885807514 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1428571429 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302424752951 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109467373605 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768373306468 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250767595188 0.12726935374 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188664334275 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 70.7449484536 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 4.93 8.71597938144 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.94 7.59969072165 78% => OK
difficult_words: 12.0 41.2886597938 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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