It is believed that older generations are more likely to have traditional values which are sometimes controversial among young generations. This essay will discuss why I somewhat agree with this view.
To begin with, many of the ideas that elderly people have are becoming minor for young people. In the past, for example, same-sex marriage was illegal in every country because of religion and fear of diversification in the role of gender and there are still a great number of people who are not able to accept the new standard even though the society has started to support the concepts of love in various ways. In addition, young people now tend to be educated about LGBTQ at school and they think marriage is a process of showing their love regardless of their gender. Tattoo is one of the biggest topics in both generations as well. It was not welcomed culture a few decades age and older people judges people with tattoos having prejudice. However, this culture is now accepted as a type of fashion and having tattoos is affordable and less meaning than before.
On the other hand, there is a range of traditional values that are important in the era. They have been developed based on the elderly generations' experiences such as manners. This is a very traditional idea to maintain a relationship with others and it has been taking over from the past as people understand manners are necessary in each period.
In conclusion, ever since society has been updating our lifestyles and values, some excessive traditional ideas faded and the rest of them are also difficult to fit in the new generation even though the old values still have meaningful aspects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...been updating our lifestyles and values, some excessive traditional ideas faded a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88732394366 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.630524434 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.3535483501 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267779433412 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906076069092 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469018532735 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146080637466 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290280790372 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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