Dear Mia,
First of all, thank you for agreeing to housesit for me and please use this letter as a note of how to take care of my house and my pet, Daisy. Hope it helps you.
I would like you to water my flowers in the kitchen with just a little bit of amount of water and place them outside every morning when it is sunny. They are a type of plant that requires a lot of sunlight. Actually, this is a more important thing while I am away. It is about Daisy. There are two steps that I would like you to do for her. Firstly, her food and water need to be changed every day and dog food is placed on the top of the shelf next to the oven. Please wash her food plate when you fill it up. Secondly, she goes for a walk once a day for about one hour. It does not matter where you take her. However, she tends to be afraid of overcrowded places so I recommend you to walk around my house or the liver which is located near the recycling shop. I am sure you know the shop.
Once again, I appreciate your support and hope you enjoy your holiday as same as I enjoy it.
Best regards, Kate
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 65, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...r my flowers in the kitchen with just a little bit of amount of water and place them outsi...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, while, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 3.95909090909 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.95005297661 2.54303337028 77% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1924844302 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.0666666667 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263768641623 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742761518481 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638754543151 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195701333669 0.12726935374 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446988586156 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.6 8.37731958763 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.1 8.71597938144 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.05 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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