Dear Rahul
I hope you are in great health. I would like to thank you again for being such a generous host and allowing me to stay in your house while I was on business seminar in Australia. I am writing this letter to request another favor about the file I left in your house.
while leaving from Australia last week i completely forgot to pack my red colored file. it has an identification sticker with my name and phone number listed on it and has all my academic certificates and the experience letters are in it. I remember that I had kept that file safely on the shelf in the room I was staying in. My new employer has asked me to submit all my documents in order to complete the formalities for issuing me the joining letter.
Can you please post that file to me at your earliest convenience so that i can submit my documents to the new employer. I hope to see you next month here in India while you will be on your trip.
Your sincerely
Naveen
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 267, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...or about the file I left in your house. while leaving from Australia last week i comp...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...r about the file I left in your house. while leaving from Australia last week i comp...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ely forgot to pack my red colored file. it has an identification sticker with my n...
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Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...me at your earliest convenience so that i can submit my documents to the new empl...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27472527473 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44507346579 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8948618246 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373519111848 0.216113520407 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14075877756 0.0766984524023 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780232238316 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261470162058 0.12726935374 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116756116349 0.0580467560999 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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