you successfully passed an interview. you are expected to start a job on 15th nov but you will not be available on that date. task write a letter to your new boss, explaining your concern and suggesting a solution.
Dear sir,
my self Kishan Patel and I had passed an interview for Manufacturing Engineering Technician position. I supposed to start a job on 15th November but due to some conflict I won't be able to join on expected date.
when I came for an interview that time I already talked to the interviewer that I expected fifteen days to finish my current job activities and also some few things done at home as I have to change my home. I am living 50 km far away from the job location and It's not convenient for me. My whole family migrate to the new home so I need one more week to setup everything and ready for the new challenges.
However, I almost one week absent so I have to fulfill that week with doing 2 hour extra work after regular hours. I think, it is helpful for both me as well as for company. I will strive my best to what comapny expectation from me.
Please accept my sincere apologies for absent for one week. I hope you will understand my situation and I will get positive reply from your side.
Yours faithfully
Kishan Patel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear sir, my self Kishan Patel and I had passed a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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..., my self Kishan Patel and I had passed an interview for Manufacturing En...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wont be able to join on expected date. when I came for an interview that time I...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
... able to join on expected date. when I came for an interview that time I alr...
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Line 4, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ange my home. I am living 50 km far away from the job location and Its not conven...
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Line 4, column 353, Rule ID: CAN_SETUP[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to set up'?
Suggestion: to set up
...to the new home so I need one more week to setup everything and ready for the new challe...
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Line 6, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o I have to fulfill that week with doing 2 hour extra work after regular hours. I...
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Line 6, column 152, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...urs. I think, it is helpful for both me as well as for company. I will strive my best to w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, as for, i suppose, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38265306122 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51075881543 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3026553141 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0909090909 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170851639026 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660782637593 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614960942054 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103581662118 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544541864458 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.