You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter:
1. Explain why you were at the restaurant
2. Describe the problems
3. write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to complain about a recent visit to your restaurant with my family. I have been a regular diner at your restaurant as it provides a variety of eating options, good ambience and panoramic view of beautiful gardens. In the context of my past experience, I had organized a wedding anniversary dinner last weekend on Saturday and we can say that we were underwhelmed by our visit.
This experience was not like the previous experiences we had with your restaurant as we felt disappointed with the quality of the meals served. To elucidate the food which was served was stale and bland especially pasta and pizza which were ordered were tasteless
Thus I would request you to inquire into this and improve the quality of meals being served to your customers as you are aware that most of the customers post their vivid dining reviews on the different websites. Such negative reviews will definitely have an effect on the business of your restaurant. In the end, I would also request you to give me a discount voucher of 40 per cent as compensation for my next meal.
I look forward to your immediate action and response on the above.
Yours sincerely,
Darren
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 262, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...beautiful gardens. In the context of my past experience, I had organized a wedding anniversary ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...za which were ordered were tasteless Thus I would request you to inquire into thi...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79807692308 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69750528513 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629807692308 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.6128857315 44.8134815571 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.888888889 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221322623955 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743058501439 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380369301919 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101991558869 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473425202326 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.