You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.
In the letter:
explain why you were at the restaurant (what event)
describe the problems (the problem)
write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the meal that my family had at your restaurant last Sunday, October 7. On that day we were celebrating my daughter's birthday in the circle of both relatives and close friends.
My family has been visiting your restaurant for two years, as the menu includes a great variety of cousins. My daughter has always liked the apple ice-cream cake, so two days before this occasion, I wanted to order it for her. However, the waiters informed me that the chef was sick and would not be able to prepare it. As a solution, they suggested me to replace it with the orange one. Although tt was not her favorite cake, I decided to purchase it, because the absence of a cake could disappoint her.
Oh her birthday, my family and friends arrived to your restaurant. Everything was going as expected, till we tasted the cake. It seemed stale, because everyone felt the smell of rotten eggs. It was so disgusting that my children fell crying. Fortunately, my wife calmed them down quickly, since the noise might have irritated the other guests in the neighboring tables. I called for the manager immediately, but the waiters explained me that he was on vacation and would be available in seven days.
I think that you understand that the unfresh ingredients in the cake ruined my daughter's celebration. You are fortunate that we did not suffer from wood poisoning as a worse consequence. Anyway, I would like you to compensate it with either a full refund or something else. Otherwise, I would have to address to the authority for help.
Yours faithfully,
Tolegen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, however, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 937.175257732 145% => OK
No of words: 279.0 206.0 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87455197133 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74705872247 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 127.690721649 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627240143369 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 290.88556701 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.83505154639 381% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2914342291 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5555555556 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05555555556 4.34317383033 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14787973746 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429876962487 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443639774696 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091954743016 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420769849798 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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