You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.

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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I visited your reataurant on 14th of this month, along with my family and was highly disappointed with the meal served to us.

We were there to celebrate my parents 50th anniversary. As it was a special occassion, we had invited our relatives and family friend's to join us. It was a mix of all age group's from kids to senior citizens. Your reataurant had amazing reviews on your website by customers. Hence, we decided to conduct pur function at your restaurant.

To begin with, most of the main course curries served were spicy and over cooked. In addition, the cake we ordered was stale. We were disappointed and heart broken beacuse it was a special evening and it was spoiled because of the meal served to us.

I was a return apology from your management as well as the chef. I would even like you to reimburse my money. I am attaching the receipt along with this letter.

Looking forward to your reply.

Your sincerely,
Sam Smith

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 111, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ld even like you to reimburse my money. I am attaching the receipt along with thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, well, in addition, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69186046512 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53458367117 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610465116279 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6747265498 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.6428571429 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2857142857 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229500510459 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707239065865 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470164246935 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124151113975 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479420863003 0.0580467560999 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.03 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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