You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.
bald taste
In the letter:
explain why you were at the restaurant
describe the problems
write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my ultimate disappointment i had in your restaurant last night. I am very much fond of your food and normally recommend people to visit your place. But now,I must say i should change my views and considerations particularly for special events.
I visited your restaurant yesterday with family to celebrate my grandfather's 80th birthday. we were total of 10 people, not much that could not be accommodated for seating. First, despite of having a prior reservation; we had to wait for 20 minutes as the place was crowded enough and our reserved table was given to some other family already. I ordered your famous 19-B soup which turned out to be really bland, as it had no taste and no ingredients flavor. After that, fish that arrived in main course was cold and did not satisfy our hungry taste buds at all. I was really embarrassed in front of my family as i took them speaking very high of your place.
I am your true loyal customer and i believe you will take notice of my complaint. Please make sure whenever the food is served, it is warm enough to enjoy the actual flavor. Also, please change the recipe of soup to previous one as mostly people come to you because of your signature soup.
I expect you will consider my suggestions, take criticism very optimistically and do corrective measures where required.
Your Sincerely,
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...r to express my ultimate disappointment i had in your restaurant last night. I am...
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...mend people to visit your place. But now,I must say i should change my views and c...
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...elebrate my grandfathers 80th birthday. we were total of 10 people, not much that ...
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...ce. I am your true loyal customer and i believe you will take notice of my comp...
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...easures where required. Your Sincerely, Sam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70491803279 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6926447837 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631147540984 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8101494012 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157416764605 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518522995361 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358964551252 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868241975719 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013951819912 0.0580467560999 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.