You travelled on plane some days back and lost your bag.Though you filled your claim to 'Lost and Found Department',you have not received your bag yet.
In your letter:-
(1) write the details of incident
(2) inquire the status of your lost bag to airline
(3) tell what you want if the bag is not found
Dear Sir,
I am writing to bring this in your attention that I travelled in your airline dated 2nd of July at 2:30 p.m. it was a comfortable Journey from Mumbai to Chandigarh. I am a regular customer of you flight. However the sad part is, I have lost my bag in flight and even I filled claim to lost and found department. But no vain.
it would be great if some information provided by you on this as it's been more than seven days. it is a big black american tourister bag, and it contain many valuable things in it. There in the bag you will find educational document, brown colour wallet and few winter cloths. i hope you find the bag,because it's not difficult for you to track the lost belongies.
I am giving you 1 more week to find out about the stuff, else I am ready to complaint about your irresponsible behaviour.
look forward to hear from you soon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... I am a regular customer of you flight. However the sad part is, I have lost my bag in ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ost and found department. But no vain. it would be great if some information prov...
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Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... this as its been more than seven days. it is a big black american tourister bag, ...
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Line 4, column 145, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'contains'?
Suggestion: contains
...ig black american tourister bag, and it contain many valuable things in it. There in th...
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Line 4, column 277, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...wn colour wallet and few winter cloths. i hope you find the bag,because its not d...
^
Line 4, column 277, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...wn colour wallet and few winter cloths. i hope you find the bag,because its not d...
^
Line 4, column 300, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , because
...w winter cloths. i hope you find the bag,because its not difficult for you to track the ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Look
...about your irresponsible behaviour. look forward to hear from you soon.
^^^^
Line 8, column 14, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...responsible behaviour. look forward to hear from you soon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38036809816 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53464087812 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687116564417 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2592531976 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358570306265 0.216113520407 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113503497278 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706047638511 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177805954346 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913806755096 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.