you want to sell your laptop. you think a friends of yours might like to buy it from you.
Dear John,
Hello! I am at pink of my health and hope you're sailing at same boat. I'm writing this letter to inform you that I'm ready to sell my laptop and offer you to buy it.
You would be on cloud nine to hear that I have been selected in the top-notch IT company named Google in the U.S.A. So, in the following month, I have to migrate to U.S.A and this laptop would be not productive for me there as it is a prerequisite condition to have super computer to work there. Moreover , you know very well about its condition, it is not necessary to apprise with its brand new condition.
As you know, I have bought the latest model of Dell inspiration in the gone calendar year.Basically, it is equipped with i-7 process with 8 GB ram, multi-media graphic Card and all necessary softwares. Do not worry about its annual insurance, I have recently paid its premium. If you have interest to buy it, feel free to visit my place on the upcoming Saturday. Please do not bother about mode of payment, I can also accept the payments in installments .
Hope to hear from you soon. Take care and stay fine.
With warm regards,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...llo! I am at pink of my health and hope youre sailing at same boat. Im writing this l...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...th and hope youre sailing at same boat. Im writing this letter to inform you that ...
^^
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... writing this letter to inform you that Im ready to sell my laptop and offer you t...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
... have been selected in the top-notch IT company named Google in the U.S.A. So, in the f...
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...llowing month, I have to migrate to U.S.A and this laptop would be not productive...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e super computer to work there. Moreover , you know very well about its condition,...
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Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Basically
...l inspiration in the gone calendar year.Basically, it is equipped with i-7 process with ...
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Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ndar year.Basically, it is equipped with i-7 process with 8 GB ram, multi-media g...
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Line 7, column 455, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...also accept the payments in installments . Hope to hear from you soon. Take car...
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Line 12, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d stay fine. With warm regards, John
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47115384615 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49690965458 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649038461538 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.8838932415 44.8134815571 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5454545455 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239843693888 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088040672691 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956379868162 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161376602374 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670619662819 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.