You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.In your letter:
1- Explain why you are selling the television.
2-Describe the television.
3- Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it
Dear mr. John Miller,
I am vaidehi bhatt, a member of your gym. my membership identification number is F1347. I have enrolled myself from August 2018. it has been a great experience for me working out with Trainer mr. Suraj Chandra. I have been part of the morning 6:00 a.m to 8:00 a.m batch. The management has put up the notice last week about the renovation, supposed to take place the coming week.
I would like to tell you, I forgot my bag in the locker room last friday. I had to reach for a very important meeting after my workout session. it skipped my mind that I had left my bag behind. The bag has some of my official papers which I will need during the next week. I would urge you to make it possible for me to collect my bag.
The registration form has my Contact details. Request you to consider it as an urgent matter. Looking forward to your response.
Yours Sincerely,
vaidehi bhatt
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| 2019-10-21 | Dasiek | 61 | view |
| 2019-03-04 | khyatidamani | 56 | view |
| 2019-03-04 | khyatidamani | 73 | view |
| 2018-12-03 | vaidehi.bhatt | 73 | view |
| 2018-07-29 | MFAAAE | 84 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear mr. John Miller, I am vaidehi bhatt, a member of your gym...
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Line 2, column 43, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: My
...am vaidehi bhatt, a member of your gym. my membership identification number is F13...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... have enrolled myself from August 2018. it has been a great experience for me work...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...rtant meeting after my workout session. it skipped my mind that I had left my bag ...
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Line 4, column 337, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e it possible for me to collect my bag. The registration form has my Contact det...
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Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to your response. Yours Sincerely, vaidehi bhatt
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47023809524 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43933626107 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.4144249154 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.0666666667 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.2 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 4.34317383033 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.94845360825 253% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129740114123 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434065798314 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057797990443 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660091760553 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554016581681 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.46 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.