You want to take a course related to your work. Write a letter to your employer.In your letter, you should:describe what the course isexplain how it will benefit the companygive suitable time schedule.

Submitted by saba2818 on Tue, 09/17/2019 - 06:57

Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing this letter to ask for your permission to take Project Management course on Thursday evening.

Now a days we are dealing with different type project, this course is all about managing multiple type of project. It will give insight about how to handle the complex project through different techniques.

The main purpose for this course is that it will teach different technique to use at workplace environment for the better performance which will be beneficial for the company. Not only that it will also enhance the managerial skill of an individual.

It is a two month course, with one class in a week. The class will be on every Thursday starting at 5:30 pm so it will be suitable for me to leave the office at 5:00 pm so that i can reach on time.

I look forward for your positive response.

Yours Sincerely,
Saba Khan

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...nagement course on Thursday evening. Now a days we are dealing with different type proj...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ment course on Thursday evening. Now a days we are dealing with different type proj...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 178, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... to leave the office at 5:00 pm so that i can reach on time. I look forward fo...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 724.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76315789474 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57945081015 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644736842105 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.091190757 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4444444444 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186319568084 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789152124633 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631934682073 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106549262811 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729844961257 0.0580467560999 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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