Dear Mr. Jones,
I am writing to you to ask your permission to attend a Spanish class on Thursday evenings.
Over the last few months we have seen an astonishing increase in the number of Spanish speaking customers at “Jones Camera Shop”. While I do speak some Spanish, I have not practised a lot in the past few years and I am clearly lacking some technical terms.
I have already discussed taking up lessons with my manager, Mr. Kent, and he agreed it would benefit our customer service, Certainly he wants me to ask your permission before enrolling.
The most suitable class nearby takes place on Thursdays from 5.30 pm, which would require me to leave the shop at around 5 pm until the end of April.
I hope you will agree that taking the class will help us to provide better assistance to our customers. I look forward to hearing from you regarding your decision at your earliest convenience.
Yours Sincerely,
Nakita Johns
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[2]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...tised a lot in the past few years and I am clearly lacking some technical terms. I have already...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88414634146 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62857218488 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701219512195 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.1231883677 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.125 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197911149539 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938845467752 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709564129384 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108225416782 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857057703824 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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