You want your company to relocate you to a new company
1.Explain why do you want to move
2. What can you do for moving
3. what you want company to do
Dear Management,
I am writing this letter to submit a request for relocation to another city.
I have been working as a Software Engineer in the research and development department for almost 4 years. In these four years, I have been an outstanding employee and tried to live by our company mission and values. I enjoyed working with my remarkable team, and moving to any other team in any other location was never in my long term goal. Unfortunately, due to my father's health condition, I have to move to my home city, so I can be with him in this hard time.
I have found a recent opening in our internal portal in Berlin, which is matching my skill set and experience, I would like to apply for this position, and I’m willing to go through the whole interview process.
Considering my special circumstance, I would like you to speed up the relocation process, so I can be with my father as quickly as possible. Let me know if you need any further information form me.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Abdul Rehman Farooq
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63829787234 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74294848842 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659574468085 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2656940666 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1434765289 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588850046905 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462702556459 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845236304422 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589141920507 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.