Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know about the accident I had at your theater located in Mansarovar, Jaipur. Also, to appreciate the support provided by your staff.
Yesterday, I visited to watch the newly released movie, Kabir Singh. I am a big fan of Shahid Kapoor and do not miss any of his movies. While I was moving towards the Gold box to get the reserved seat, Somehow I slipped and fell down on the stairs and got injuries in the elbow and knee of the right leg. I was not able to stand due to severe pain.
Fortunately, One of your employees came forward and helped me to get out of the hall and arranged a wheelchair to sit. He did first aid on the spot by using pain killer spray and bandage. Moreover, He arranged your company vehicle to drop to my home.
I believe, The primary reason for the accident is the carpet on the stairs, It is extremely silky and hard to make a grip on it. Another reason is the dim light in the aisle. These problems can be fixed in order to avoid a similar situation in the future.
Thank you once again for the kind help and first aid.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...poor and do not miss any of his movies. while I was moving towards the Gold box to ge...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
... hall and arranged a wheelchair to sit. he did first aid on the spot by using pain...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...by using pain killer spray and bandage. moreover, he arranged your company vehicle to dr...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...r reason is the dim light in the aisle. these problems can be fixed in order to avoid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31132075472 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28580447554 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655660377358 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.399898995 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3076923077 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140748716267 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416117082336 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440076668604 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730182343868 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659949974361 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.