Dear Rohan,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for an auspicious dinner that you and your family hosted recently at your home, and I am inviting you and your family to my place on coming Sunday since I am hosting a surprising birthday event.
On our last meetup at your place, it's was wonderful in meeting you and your parents. Your parents are lovely, amazing, and joyful to the depth of heart. Besides, your mother is one of the cooks that I've ever met after my mum. She cooked delicious Indian cuisine along with never forgetting tasteful gulab jamun. The main course menu, especially the dal makhani was extremely yummy with soft Indian pieces of bread. I felt nostalgic after meeting your family about our childhood memories.
This Sunday I am throwing a surprise birthday party for my mother, and I want you and your family to join us on this occasion. She will be happy to meet you and your family since she hasn't seen you for a long time. Further, I want you to please help in setting up the arrangements for this event as you have already organized a birthday party for my mother. Also, I need your advice in finalizing the favorite cuisines your family and my mother likes to eat. Please update me as soon as possible.
I am hoping to see you on Sunday with your family.
Warm regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'your parents'.
Suggestion: your parents
...ce its was wonderful in meeting you and your parents Your parents are lovely amazing and joyful to the de...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...es your mother is one of the cooks that Ive ever met after my mum She cooked delici...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...y to meet you and your family since she hasnt seen you for a long time Further I want...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49372384937 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24953675431 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55230125523 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 239.0 16.3608247423 1461% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1074.0 76.5299724578 1403% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 239.0 16.8248392259 1421% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 4.34317383033 391% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313016632346 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.313016632346 0.0766984524023 408% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211560185328 0.12726935374 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324407920625 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 119.2 8.37731958763 1423% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -154.19 70.7449484536 -218% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 94.1 7.45979381443 1261% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.24 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 18.27 7.59969072165 240% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 51.0 8.62886597938 591% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 97.6 8.54432989691 1142% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 98.0 8.15463917526 1202% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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