You went to your friend house and had meal.
Write a letter to your friend thanking him and his family for the meal
• Tell you enjoyed about the meal
• Thanks to his parents and what you think about them
• Suggest arrangements for his invite at your place
Dear Rohan,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of health and happiness. I’m writing this letter to express my gratitude for an auspicious dinner that your family hosted for me at your house recently and I promised that I'll be inviting you along with your family to my home. Since I am hosting a birthday event on coming Saturday at my house, I want you and your family to join us for this birthday party.
On our last meetup at your home, the experience was wonderful in visiting you and your family. Your parents are amazing, lovely, and joyful to the depth of heart. Such a welcoming family with a warm heart you all are and on top of this is the icing your mother is one of the best cooks that I’ve ever met. She cooked a delicious meal and a never forgetting tasteful lemon cheesecake. Also, I still remember the main course menu, especially the taste of Dal Makhani that you served me with a soft piece of bread.
Now, I’m throwing a birthday party for my mother next Sunday, so, I want you and your family to join us at this party. My mother would love to have you around on her special day since it’s good to have family and friends on such occasions. Moreover, could you suggest setting up the dinner menu for the event? If that's not too much to ask, please update me with some special and tasty cuisines your family would like to eat. In this way, I can finalize the menu according to our families.
I am hoping to see you at the party.
Regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...you in the best of health and happiness Im writing this letter to express my grati...
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...amily to join us for this birthday party On our last meetup at your home the expe...
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...ur mother is one of the best cooks that Ive ever met She cooked a delicious meal an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 278.0 206.0 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24100719424 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12531489613 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525179856115 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 278.0 16.3608247423 1699% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1179.0 76.5299724578 1541% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 278.0 16.8248392259 1652% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.0 4.34317383033 668% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323437367233 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.323437367233 0.0766984524023 422% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200246994016 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609116959019 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 137.5 8.37731958763 1641% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -193.77 70.7449484536 -274% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 109.3 7.45979381443 1465% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.79 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.7 7.59969072165 259% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 51.0 8.62886597938 591% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 113.2 8.54432989691 1325% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 20.0 8.15463917526 245% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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