You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket.
Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter
say who you are
give details about the accident
suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents
Dear Sir/Madam,
This letter is in connection with an incident which occurred in your store located on 3rd Street in Oakville. I would like to lodge a complaint in regards to this unfortunate accident.
My name is Amy and I am a regular customer of your establishment since I moved to this neighborhood last January. I visit Coles every Sunday and am a gold level mender of your loyalty program. The time I spent at the supermarket with my kids over the weekend is a treasured experience for me which was ruined due to the negligence of your staff on duty.
Like every other Sunday, this time as well, I was there shopping for my weekly groceries and was passing by the frozen food section to pick up some cheese when I slipped, lost my balance, and I skinned my knee by hitting the trolley in from of me. All this happened because of the water on the floor that was left unattended by the staff who conveniently forgot to clean it up.
I would like you to please make sure that such a thing doesn’t happen again and would like to suggest that you place a rug in this section to prevent such leakages.
Look forward to seeing the suggested changes incorporated at the store next time I am there.
Yours Sincerely
Karishma Dave
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, This letter is in connection with an inc...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...lle. I would like to lodge a complaint in regards to this unfortunate accident. My name...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n regards to this unfortunate accident. My name is Amy and I am a regular custom...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 379, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...who conveniently forgot to clean it up. I would like you to please make sure tha...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... this section to prevent such leakages. Look forward to seeing the suggested cha...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ated at the store next time I am there. Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
^^^^^
Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xt time I am there. Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
^^^^^^
Line 15, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56758905985 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608888888889 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6282614955 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.6 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105996349475 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371691225765 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353527041212 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0527592449657 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381632320089 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, This letter is in connection with an inc...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...lle. I would like to lodge a complaint in regards to this unfortunate accident. My name...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n regards to this unfortunate accident. My name is Amy and I am a regular custom...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 379, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...who conveniently forgot to clean it up. I would like you to please make sure tha...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... this section to prevent such leakages. Look forward to seeing the suggested cha...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ated at the store next time I am there. Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
^^^^^
Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xt time I am there. Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
^^^^^^
Line 15, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56758905985 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608888888889 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6282614955 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.6 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105996349475 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371691225765 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353527041212 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0527592449657 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381632320089 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.