You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you of the accident I had at 3:45 pm yesterday.
I was pushing my shopping cart down the aisle by the frozen meats when I slipped on the wet floor and broke the scaphoid bone in my right wrist as I tried to stop my fall. Your staff were very helpful, and your assistant manager drove me to St. Martin's Hospital, where my arm was put in a cast that will stay on for about six weeks.
I am a self-employed canteen owner, and will not be able to work for at least two months. My insurance will only cover my medical costs, not my lost earnings, which, as you can see from the attached photocopies, average 450 pounds a week. Given that the accident was due to the dangerous condition of the floor, I trust you will arrange for me to be compensated with an amount equal to my average weekly earning for the time that I am unable to work.
May I suggest that you instruct your staff to pay better attention to safety and have a sign that clearly warns customers of such dangers as a slippery floor.
Yours sincerely,
John Smith
- You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wishto complain to the supermarket. 89
- You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. 89
- You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. 89
- You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wishto complain to the supermarket. 61
- You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he time that I am unable to work. May I suggest that you instruct your staff t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31553398058 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35040202288 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650485436893 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.56713078 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.125 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.095982552999 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423481562536 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401775074448 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708950654252 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399470716527 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.