you were on a pleasant trip and had rented a flat from your friend who was on an holiday. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter writ him:
>how you felt about the trip and
>how did you take care of his house in his absence
Dear Joan,
I write this letter to you for saying thanks for offer us your flat. Our trip was very pleasant because of your apartment, which situated in the center of the city. Due to this all sight seeing places were easy to reach. We reached everywhere with in a few minutes and enjoyed enough time on that places. Weather was awesome and cool wind make our trip memorable.Moreover, we tried local famous food and without a shadow of a doubt it had out of world taste. Shopping street was congested but they had wonderful variety of clothes.
Your house is very spacious and decoration is astound us. All of us gave compliment for your interior. I hired a Maid during the trip, so that all the things keep clean and tidy. she cleaned house properly and place thing in a proper way. She was also watering the plants.
I want to invite you in my place for a thanksgiving dinner. I believe you may not denied it.
your's faithfully
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Joan, I write this letter to you for saying th...
^^^^
Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...e and cool wind make our trip memorable.Moreover, we tried local famous food and without...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'astounded'.
Suggestion: astounded
...ouse is very spacious and decoration is astound us. All of us gave compliment for your ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...hat all the things keep clean and tidy. she cleaned house properly and place thing ...
^^^
Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... cleaned house properly and place thing in a proper way. She was also watering the plants. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... way. She was also watering the plants. I want to invite you in my place for a t...
^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...ner. I believe you may not denied it. yours faithfully
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 768.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51764705882 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49943938351 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688235294118 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2880056077 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.0769230769 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0769230769 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240009327014 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774243055542 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566122164837 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138749356369 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04091578532 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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