You were supposed to go an interview in a few weeks, but you have since found out you cannot go on the date arranged.
Write a letter to potential employer . In your letter
*Tell them why you need to move the interview time.
*Ask to change the interview date.
* Explain that you are still interested in being interviewed for the job.
I am writing with hope that I will be able to reschedule my interview on 24th August , 2020. I had spoken with your secretary on phone and we verbally agreed on the date , but emergency situation just arise that requires the need to postpone the interview.
Let me explain the situation in detail. I was diagnosed with hernia last week which requires immediate surgical operation. Therefore, I booked 29th August 2020 for the surgery and it will take up to two weeks before I can fully recover from the surgical wound. I would appreciate if you can reschedule my interview for first week of next month , I am with hope that I should have fully recovered.
I am of course much interested in the position because it matches my educational background, experience and career goals. I would appreciate if you give an opportunity to offer my skills and experience to contribute to the the accomplishment of the organisation's goals.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Kayode Olakunle.
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| 2020-06-18 | oluwaseyik | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'August 2020'.
Suggestion: August 2020
...able to reschedule my interview on 24th August , 2020. I had spoken with your secretary on p...
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Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o reschedule my interview on 24th August , 2020. I had spoken with your secretary...
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Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...phone and we verbally agreed on the date , but emergency situation just arise tha...
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Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and we verbally agreed on the date , but emergency situation just arise that requ...
^^
Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y interview for first week of next month , I am with hope that I should have fully...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ackground, experience and career goals. I would appreciate if you give an opportu...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... skills and experience to contribute to the the accomplishment of the organisations goa...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... skills and experience to contribute to the the accomplishment of the organisations goa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, therefore, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00548385626 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.053692735 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18390375524 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699819507931 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623446243107 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118452060547 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418200140329 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.