You will go to London soon to stay there for one year. Write a letter to an agency to get information about accommodation. In your letter, you should say:
• why you are going to London
• what kind of accommodation you want
• when you will arrive
Dear Sir
I am writing this letter to you to seek information about the types of the accommodations available in London and to tell you about my preferences.
Well, to accomplish my further studies, I have chosen University of London and also got a scholarship. My course is for one year so I am planning to stay there for a year. As, no friends or relatives of mine are staying in London, so I am consulting to you about the varieties of stays in London which I can afford. I preferred to stay in a single sharing room so that my studies will not get affected. Moreover, it is my preference to have a kitchen so that I can cook food of my own choice.
My college starts on 1st of September and I have booked my tickets for 20th of August and will reach at airport on 21st of August at 5'O clock in the evening according to London's date and time. Could you please arrange my stay till that and let me know if you are providing a pickup facility from the airport.
Looking forward to your prompt reply.
Yours sincerely
James Thompson
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38461538462 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60826582706 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610256410256 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0363130751 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301749512732 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113537859718 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105028232743 0.0603063233224 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187557861696 0.12726935374 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123578415397 0.0580467560999 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.