Hi Friend,
Hope you are doing fine.
I am writing to inform you that, soon I am migrating to London for my new Job. I will be joining as a Finance Manager in Capital Private Limited.
As London is new to me, I need your help in finding a accommodation for me. You might be in touch with property brokers as you are living in London for quite a long time.
I have done little research on the internet, and as per my research, khan street is close to my office. I am looking for a 1BHK apartment as I am alone and it will be sufficient for me. It would be really helpful if I can get an apartment which is fully equipped with power back. Preferred rent will be up to $300 per month as this is the budget given by my office. My movement date will be 15 June 2018.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Thanking You.
Misha Grover
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- You will move to a city for work.You know some people who live there.Tell them for help finding accommodationTell them where you would like to liveTell them the type of place you are looking for. 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... new to me, I need your help in finding a accommodation for me. You might be in t...
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Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
... new to me, I need your help in finding a accommodation for me. You might be in touch with prop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 685.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17682926829 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31247136098 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621951219512 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.98757139 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.2727272727 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265753942805 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102547167869 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877356146789 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1654356507 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056748308241 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.37 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.