Dear Sir/Madam
I , nitin chitale, have recently completed my graduation in IT Engineering from Oxford university.
Through my college days, I have developed an interest in the artificial intelligence. I would like to pursue my career in artificial intelligence, especially around the machine learning. however I feel that I need to take up an academic course for machine learning to gain the knowledge around this technology which will boost my chances to land a job with the company wherein I can work on the machine learning projects and grow myself further in this area.
I saw an advertisement about the artificial intelligence course that you are offering in your prestigious institute. As specified in the advertisement, I logged on to the college's website and tried to find out further details about the course. however, I couldn't find any specific details that I was looking for. Therefore I request you to provide the below details so that I can assess the same and decide on whether I can join your institute to take this course.
- are the machine learning topics included in the course?
- What is the duration of the course and the exact start date?
- Overall cost of the course
As I am really keen to learn more on this subject, I am looking forward to hear from you.
Yours Sincerely
nitin chitale
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear Sir/Madam I , nitin chitale, have recently completed ...
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Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...especially around the machine learning. however I feel that I need to take up an academ...
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Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: however,
...especially around the machine learning. however I feel that I need to take up an academ...
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Line 6, column 172, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'colleges'' or 'college's'?
Suggestion: colleges'; college's
...n the advertisement, I logged on to the colleges website and tried to find out further d...
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Line 6, column 246, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... out further details about the course. however, I couldnt find any specific details th...
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Line 6, column 257, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...r details about the course. however, I couldnt find any specific details that I was lo...
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Line 6, column 315, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...pecific details that I was looking for. Therefore I request you to provide the below deta...
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Line 8, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...your institute to take this course. - are the machine learning topics included...
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Line 13, column 73, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...e on this subject, I am looking forward to hear from you. Yours Sincerely nitin c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, so, therefore, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99103139013 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84175458071 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596412556054 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.146475428 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.75 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150200899151 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514808864631 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481253709114 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.053320615859 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063768339439 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.