Dear Office of Admission,
This is a follow-up letter to my previous inquiry on my appliance status. My name is William von Habsburg, Arch Count of Wisconsin, 12th elector of the Neo-Roman Empire of Amerika.
By my royal decreed, I was invited to be an honorable student in the College of Australia Renaissance. My butler reminded me that, my selective course is about to initiate. However, my status is not confirmed by the automatic seat allocation system.
I hereby demand one answer, if I, still have a place in the course ENG1212 "Middle East Transformation and Secularism." You have 2400 hours to respond to my e-mail, or face consequences. You either pay me 200 ducats for the late reply, or I shall remove you from the governing council.
Yours Truly,
Royal Seal of Wisconsin County
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tor of the Neo-Roman Empire of Amerika. By my royal decreed, I was invited to be...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 682.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 135.0 206.0 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05185185185 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04989149552 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.733333333333 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4033135751 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.25 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152159369031 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572319223543 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466550846957 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0519889169695 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674278317859 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 7.59969072165 131% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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